I have some poems, but I won't post any more than this if I don't get replies!

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gaara-is-smexy4596

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Imitation of: The Dream Keeper by Langston Hughes
The Idea Keeper
Bring me all of your ideas,
You thinkers.
Bring me all of your
Amazing thoughts
That I may wrap them
In a quilt of rose petals
Away from the sly, cunning humans
of the world.​
 
Re: I have some poems, but I won't post any more than this if I don't get replie

Thanks! Okay, here goes:

Who I Am
I am a music, video game, and anime freak.
I wonder why people like to start flame wars on forums.
I hear a song's meaning when I listen to it.
I see the world in a different way. Like a video game.
I want to become a singer or video game designer.

I am a gamer.
I pretend to be a kunoichi.
I believe in everyone's right to express their opinions.
I touch my feet on the correct arrows in DDR.
I feel disappointed in people who rate a game that they've never seen or played.
I worry when someone I care about is ill.
I cry whenever I think about April 16,2005.

I am unique.
I understand people's opinions and thoughts about things.
I say words in Japanese when I don't want people to understand.
I dream about what life would be like in the "Naruto" world.
I hope to stay like me.
I am who I am.​
 
Re: I have some poems, but I won't post any more than this if I don't get replie

He was an amazing poet.
Okay, this one's a persona poem!

Ayúdeme

Lost in a forest,
Cool, green leaves brushing against my face.
I'm running,
Trying to avoid my fate.
I´m wondering,
"What did I do wrong?"
I am a kitsune
Terrified of
My own destiny.
I ran away from
My home
To get away from
The disapproving looks
From the others.
I am a monster.
Every time I walked through town,
Everyone disappeared
Into their homes.
If I ever go back,
I'll prove that destiny is a liar.​
 
Re: I have some poems, but I won't post any more than this if I don't get replie

Sheena said:
It's easy to make a nice poem when you're imitating Langston Hughes. The man was amazing.
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I was thinking the same thing.

The others were okay. I'll admit I wasn't all that impressed with them, but the first one was very good (probably because it was based off of a very good poem).

Out of curiosity, why did you make the last one's title help me, in Spanish?
 
Re: I have some poems, but I won't post any more than this if I don't get replie

I couldn't think of anything else. Plus, my Mac Mini can type in different languages.
Why don't you guys type some of your poems here? It would be a nice change from all of the typing I'm doing.
 
Re: I have some poems, but I won't post any more than this if I don't get replie

Many of us have, and put them up here, in their own topics.

Personally, I haven't because I haven't written any poem that I would consider more than average in years, not that I write poetry all that often.
 
Re: I have some poems, but I won't post any more than this if I don't get replie

I was just wondering why I haven't seen many poetry topics. Wait a second, I have one last poem!
This is in Gaara's POV.

The Demon Inside

MonsterThat's what they say to me.
People are afraid,
But I have no clue why.
Might it be
The demon?
Or maybe it's just
Me.
I hurt people on accident,
but I can't control it.
None of this would've happened
If the Kazekage hadn't wanted
A human weapon.
I'm not just Sabaku no Gaara anymore.
I am a monster.​
 
Re: I have some poems, but I won't post any more than this if I don't get replie

first the best, i like it n_n, congrat
 
Re: I have some poems, but I won't post any more than this if I don't get replie

gaara-is-smexy4596 said:
He was an amazing poet.
Okay, this one's a persona poem!

Ayúdeme

Lost in a forest,
Cool, green leaves brushing against my face.
I'm running,
Trying to avoid my fate.
I´m wondering,
"What did I do wrong?"
I am a kitsune
Terrified of
My own destiny.
I ran away from
My home
To get away from
The disapproving looks
From the others.
I am a monster.
Every time I walked through town,
Everyone disappeared
Into their homes.
If I ever go back,
I'll prove that destiny is a liar.​
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Oh, I really liked that! :)
 
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