Dark-Abyss
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I wrote a story last year called THE DEVASTATOR OF THE DEEP not saying it was good but meh i wrote it on the spot.
There was a ship sailing across the globe hunting for rare artifacts the name of the ship was the blue diamond. On this ship was a caption named Oliver and his wife Elizabeth and of course the captions crew who worked very hard around the ship to make shore the decks were scrubbed and the wood wasn’t falling apart. Oliver and Elizabeth loved to travel to countries where there have been news or sittings of rare artifacts. So far they haven’t got many rare artifacts but the couple were happy that they got to spend time with each other. But of course there is work to be done so Oliver and Elizabeth cant spend to much time with each other. Elizabeth Helps with the washing and cooking on the ship while Oliver has to stir the ship when the men are off duty and when the mean are on duty he has to tell the stirrer which was to go. Have you herd any news on the artifact in Egypt called the golden tripod? Oliver asked Elizabeth while she was holding a basket full of close no I haven’t sorry Hun Then Elizabeth gives Oliver a kiss on the cheek Ok Oliver said quietly. CAPTION? yelled James yes what is it there is a storm coming from the north did you want to navigate around it caption how bad is the does it look? asked Oliver bad caption.. Oliver didn’t say anything instead he walked up to the top deck and James followed Oliver
looked north and said try your best to navigate threw that storm but caption but nothing do it caption I don’t think the ship will be able to hold up in the storm YES SHE WILL never talk down of this ship again yes caption James walked off to tell Peter the navigator at the time to navigate threw the storm Peter looked at James and said are you crazy this ship will be torn to pieces If we go threw that storm… captions orders are to go threw the storm ARGH James hold the wheel for a sec I’m going to talk some sense in to our caption ok said James. James grabbed the wheel and Peter walked off. CAPTION? Peter yelled in a annoyed tone yes what is it? We cant go threw that storm caption she wont be able to handle the pressure of the waves the storm looks really bad telling me to navigate threw that is a death wish for us all yes that is true said Oliver but if we navigate around it it’ll take twice as long to get to the Egypt shores yes that is true caption but if we go threw that storm we might never get to Egypt because we will be sleeping with the fish’s caption. Ok said Oliver navigate around the storm James ran down screaming CAPTION the ship is going around the storm we are safe ok James thanks for the update. Peter walked up to the top deck and grabbed the wheel James followed. Do you think it’s true do you think its real? What? Peter replied Looking confused you know the myth about the creature that stalks the
oceans crushing ships to a pulp and drowning or devouring any one on it the kraken? Don’t be stupid that’s just a myth you cant believe something like that would exist… Hmmmm I guess so well thanks James walks off. Oliver find’s Elizabeth cooking the dinner already laughed Oliver Yep he he Elizabeth smiled and gave Oliver a kiss on the lips. Smells nice Oliver said Thanks Elizabeth said cheerfully. After dinner Every one went to bed but Oliver, Oliver was trying to think of a way they would get to the Egypt shore’s faster ARGH I cant think I’m going to bed Oliver walked in to the room quietly so he didn’t wake up Elizabeth or any of the crew mates. In the morning Oliver woke up finding that every one else woke up before him he walked out the room and rubbed his eye’s and sore Elizabeth standing in the hall way MORNING SLEEPY HEAD Elizabeth yelled cheerfully MORNING DEAR Oliver said sleepily. Oliver walked up to the top deck and sore that James was stirring the ship Oliver walked up and said so that’s why I woke up your stirring the ship ha-ha hardy hare hare very funny caption how have the sea’s been James? good caption nice and calm that’s good. Oliver walked down to his room and got dressed When all of a sudden he herd Peter run down yelling CAPTION, CAPTION Oliver walked out the room yes Peter what is it CAPTION there’s a small boat up ahead looks pretty beat up and there are
people on bored should we help? Yes Oliver answered ok caption Peter ran to the top deck to tell James to stir close to the small boat so they could help James turned the boat around towards the small boat AHOY said a man on the boat HAY yelled Peter DO YOU NEED HELP? Peter yelled YES MY DAUGTER IS SICK Peter looked at the boat more closely there was 1 child 2 men and 2 women. OK hang on ill get a rope to pull your boat closer so we can get you out of there Peter ran to get a rope from the storage room ran back to throw the rope he was just about to then suddenly froze James said hurry up Peter throw the rope ARGH James ran up and grabbed the rope then suddenly herd a scream James quickly looked down to see a colossal shadow under the boat and under there boat then suddenly this massive tentacle crashed to the surface and flipped the small boat over James stood there trembling and looked at the people who were yelling HELP James shook his head and threw the rope down just when the man grabbed the rope and his daughter the water began to rise then all of a sudden a gaping mouth just came out of the water and swallowed all of the people in the water James shook in terror and YELLED KRAKEN. Oliver ran up and said what happened where are those people then all of a sudden they herd a scream they turned around to find these massive tentacles coming out of the water like giant
snakes ready to kill and started grabbing people James ran to the to the stairs NO DON’T said Peter James got to the stairs the a tentacle came up from the bottom of him and grabbed him HEEEEEEEEELP PLZ OH GOD NO Peter ran to James in a desperate try to save him then all of a sudden this massive tentacle came up it was bigger than the other ones and just slammed in the middle of the boat and practically split the boat in half Peter fell in the crack and the colossal mouth came up and Peter fell in NOOOO Oliver said Then all of a sudden there was no one left then he herd a scream it was Elizabeth she was trying to not slide down in the crack a tentacle came up and grabbed Elizabeth around the waist NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO screamed Oliver, Oliver just stood there in fear helpless to save his wife and watched the tentacle crush the life out of Elizabeth it broke every bone in her body and then the tentacle threw Elizabeth in the water Oliver didn’t move then all of a sudden got up and ran and jumped off the boat in to the water as he was under water he looked in front of him was the mouth of the beast the last things Oliver herd and sore was the roar of the kraken and the gaping mouth of the beast and all he could smell when the mouth was around him was the stench of death and then the mouth closed around him crushing him. The beast swam off and roared
when the roar stopped all there was was a eerie silence and what used to be the blue diamond was now floating wreckage in the water. It was Oliver’s and Elizabeth’s last time together before they were swallowed by the cold mouth of the legendary beast the Kraken.
There was a ship sailing across the globe hunting for rare artifacts the name of the ship was the blue diamond. On this ship was a caption named Oliver and his wife Elizabeth and of course the captions crew who worked very hard around the ship to make shore the decks were scrubbed and the wood wasn’t falling apart. Oliver and Elizabeth loved to travel to countries where there have been news or sittings of rare artifacts. So far they haven’t got many rare artifacts but the couple were happy that they got to spend time with each other. But of course there is work to be done so Oliver and Elizabeth cant spend to much time with each other. Elizabeth Helps with the washing and cooking on the ship while Oliver has to stir the ship when the men are off duty and when the mean are on duty he has to tell the stirrer which was to go. Have you herd any news on the artifact in Egypt called the golden tripod? Oliver asked Elizabeth while she was holding a basket full of close no I haven’t sorry Hun Then Elizabeth gives Oliver a kiss on the cheek Ok Oliver said quietly. CAPTION? yelled James yes what is it there is a storm coming from the north did you want to navigate around it caption how bad is the does it look? asked Oliver bad caption.. Oliver didn’t say anything instead he walked up to the top deck and James followed Oliver
looked north and said try your best to navigate threw that storm but caption but nothing do it caption I don’t think the ship will be able to hold up in the storm YES SHE WILL never talk down of this ship again yes caption James walked off to tell Peter the navigator at the time to navigate threw the storm Peter looked at James and said are you crazy this ship will be torn to pieces If we go threw that storm… captions orders are to go threw the storm ARGH James hold the wheel for a sec I’m going to talk some sense in to our caption ok said James. James grabbed the wheel and Peter walked off. CAPTION? Peter yelled in a annoyed tone yes what is it? We cant go threw that storm caption she wont be able to handle the pressure of the waves the storm looks really bad telling me to navigate threw that is a death wish for us all yes that is true said Oliver but if we navigate around it it’ll take twice as long to get to the Egypt shores yes that is true caption but if we go threw that storm we might never get to Egypt because we will be sleeping with the fish’s caption. Ok said Oliver navigate around the storm James ran down screaming CAPTION the ship is going around the storm we are safe ok James thanks for the update. Peter walked up to the top deck and grabbed the wheel James followed. Do you think it’s true do you think its real? What? Peter replied Looking confused you know the myth about the creature that stalks the
oceans crushing ships to a pulp and drowning or devouring any one on it the kraken? Don’t be stupid that’s just a myth you cant believe something like that would exist… Hmmmm I guess so well thanks James walks off. Oliver find’s Elizabeth cooking the dinner already laughed Oliver Yep he he Elizabeth smiled and gave Oliver a kiss on the lips. Smells nice Oliver said Thanks Elizabeth said cheerfully. After dinner Every one went to bed but Oliver, Oliver was trying to think of a way they would get to the Egypt shore’s faster ARGH I cant think I’m going to bed Oliver walked in to the room quietly so he didn’t wake up Elizabeth or any of the crew mates. In the morning Oliver woke up finding that every one else woke up before him he walked out the room and rubbed his eye’s and sore Elizabeth standing in the hall way MORNING SLEEPY HEAD Elizabeth yelled cheerfully MORNING DEAR Oliver said sleepily. Oliver walked up to the top deck and sore that James was stirring the ship Oliver walked up and said so that’s why I woke up your stirring the ship ha-ha hardy hare hare very funny caption how have the sea’s been James? good caption nice and calm that’s good. Oliver walked down to his room and got dressed When all of a sudden he herd Peter run down yelling CAPTION, CAPTION Oliver walked out the room yes Peter what is it CAPTION there’s a small boat up ahead looks pretty beat up and there are
people on bored should we help? Yes Oliver answered ok caption Peter ran to the top deck to tell James to stir close to the small boat so they could help James turned the boat around towards the small boat AHOY said a man on the boat HAY yelled Peter DO YOU NEED HELP? Peter yelled YES MY DAUGTER IS SICK Peter looked at the boat more closely there was 1 child 2 men and 2 women. OK hang on ill get a rope to pull your boat closer so we can get you out of there Peter ran to get a rope from the storage room ran back to throw the rope he was just about to then suddenly froze James said hurry up Peter throw the rope ARGH James ran up and grabbed the rope then suddenly herd a scream James quickly looked down to see a colossal shadow under the boat and under there boat then suddenly this massive tentacle crashed to the surface and flipped the small boat over James stood there trembling and looked at the people who were yelling HELP James shook his head and threw the rope down just when the man grabbed the rope and his daughter the water began to rise then all of a sudden a gaping mouth just came out of the water and swallowed all of the people in the water James shook in terror and YELLED KRAKEN. Oliver ran up and said what happened where are those people then all of a sudden they herd a scream they turned around to find these massive tentacles coming out of the water like giant
snakes ready to kill and started grabbing people James ran to the to the stairs NO DON’T said Peter James got to the stairs the a tentacle came up from the bottom of him and grabbed him HEEEEEEEEELP PLZ OH GOD NO Peter ran to James in a desperate try to save him then all of a sudden this massive tentacle came up it was bigger than the other ones and just slammed in the middle of the boat and practically split the boat in half Peter fell in the crack and the colossal mouth came up and Peter fell in NOOOO Oliver said Then all of a sudden there was no one left then he herd a scream it was Elizabeth she was trying to not slide down in the crack a tentacle came up and grabbed Elizabeth around the waist NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO screamed Oliver, Oliver just stood there in fear helpless to save his wife and watched the tentacle crush the life out of Elizabeth it broke every bone in her body and then the tentacle threw Elizabeth in the water Oliver didn’t move then all of a sudden got up and ran and jumped off the boat in to the water as he was under water he looked in front of him was the mouth of the beast the last things Oliver herd and sore was the roar of the kraken and the gaping mouth of the beast and all he could smell when the mouth was around him was the stench of death and then the mouth closed around him crushing him. The beast swam off and roared
when the roar stopped all there was was a eerie silence and what used to be the blue diamond was now floating wreckage in the water. It was Oliver’s and Elizabeth’s last time together before they were swallowed by the cold mouth of the legendary beast the Kraken.