So, haha.. I wrote this

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Two nights ago, I woke up, wrote this, then went back to sleep. Forgot a wrote it, then found it today on my desk top and remembred I wrote it. So any spelling or grammar mistakes I left in, because... I guess thats how it was supposed to be haha.

You don’t hear me you hear my heart beat and that’s all you hear, its all I want you to see is the vibrations but all you can do is remember the feeling and remember the hate. You can’t take the breathe away without causing a shortness of time, time left to beat, time left to enjoy a summer that ended before you came. Resurrected in the thought of the sound of your eyes opening and never closing, the sound of looking and the sound of finding a reason to close them, and open your mouth, fall back and feel the nothing fill you with everything you ever wanted it to, fill you with the breath and the beat to silence every closed eye for the last time. Remember everything that hasn’t happened yet and forget what brought you here and embrace what’s going to take you away. Chest out, fingers crossed, love the separation and embrace the loss, because what you gained is the last thing you could ever expect, freedom without death. The cure to growing older is an early death, but no cure is needed for something we don’t want top get rid of. The cure takes away everything we need to feel alive.
 
Oh, that is awesome, man! I love reading your stuff. Sometimes, I wake up in the middle of the night and words for poems start coming to me, kinda like how you woke up and started writing your thing (not sure what your things are called, they are kinda like poetry but not)

Anyhow, it is great that you wrote it down, because sometimes I just try to chant it in my head a few times before faling back to sleep, and then when I wake up in the morning I can't recall how it goes.
 
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